Monday, August 29, 2011

Tales of The Handmaid's Tale

   The text I selected to serve as my contemporary example of British Literature, Margaret Atwood's The Handmaid's Tale, is not only a fantastic example of compelling storytelling but also one of the better books I've read recently.  I chose the book because I'd heard that Atwood's fiction in particular does a good job of addressing feminism, a subject that dovetails nicely with some of the more esoteric authors--read mostly incomprehensible postmodernists--that I occasionally gravitate towards.  The Handmaid's Tale managed to live up to the hype, weaving together cutting social insight and a refreshingly self-aware first person narrative.
     Perhaps the greatest strength of The Handmaid's Tale's is the way it manages to seamlessly convey profound messages about humanity without interrupting Offred's chillingly clinical and analytic description of events.  While the argument that the entire novel functions as a sort of meta-narrative about human nature is certainly valid, there are a few specific examples of Atwood's talent that stand out.  First is Atwood's introduction of the character of Moira as a foil to Offred.  Where the latter accepts her training as a handmaid as something that is inexorable, Moira holds an Aunt hostage and escapes to freedom.  Even when recaptured and sent to Jezebel's--little more than a glorified brothel--Moira represents the capacity of the human spirit for agency even in a situation where it seems as if she has little control over her surroundings.  Instead of allowing herself to break in such a bleak situation, Moira uses her body and the power she has over the men who ironically sought to suppress that power in order to maintain her identity and individual agency.  This is not the only section of the book where Atwood uses the act of sex as a metaphor for freedom and rebellion--Offred's later physical relationship with Nick is very much characterized as her reclaiming a bit of her past self.     Equally important is the Commander's reference to the reasoning behind elevating men as superior during the construction of the Republic of Gilead--apparently many men felt as if they no longer had a distinct role to play in society after having to share their traditional societal roles.  After the new regime takes over and creates a society where men are ascendant, however, control over their bodies becomes one of the suppressed women's only forms of emancipatory action.  The text's strength lies in discussing such things while at the same time telling an entertaining, horrifying, and insightful story.
    While The Handmaid's Tale is strong in almost all of its aspects, its greatest weakness lies in the scope, rather than the detail, of its narrative.  Because the story is told entirely from Offred's perspective, much of the nature of the world is left for the reader to interpret from snatches of information Offred manages to glean from the Commander and her fellow handmaids.  Readers are granted information about a specific portion of the Republic of Gilead, but the state of the rest of the world is left very much untouched.  While the United States has been taken over by religious fundamentalists, Atwood does not discuss events happening in other countries beyond the very limited scope of Offred's experience.  While the narrative is perhaps more powerful for being limited and focusing on the experience of a single person, Atwood could aspire to grander implications by describing the state of the entire world a la 1984.  Ultimately, scope is a very minor complaint when compared to the significance of The Handmaid's Tale's message--even in the face of the blackest adversity, humans still have control over their fate.
   

5 comments:

  1. The main idea is not entirely evident in this draft, it seems to be more of an essay about why the novel is compelling than why/how it makes a good story. Even though this main point is lost, I think you will be able to easily add it into the paragraphs you have already that are filled with seemingly usable evidence. A thesis will start you off and then moving to weaving the storytelling into your body paragraphs. I did like how you have a negative in the draft, it's different and will provide good contrast in the essay when the storytelling point is added in. Evidence of particular incidents could be increased, some of the evidence you currently have seems a bit like plot summary and/or philosophizing, which I am not sure is appropriate for this paper. I really like what you have as your first draft though! I know you have all the ideas, you just need to get them down on paper. You will produce a great essay with a bit of writing and editing!

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  2. Still having trouble! This is Zoe.

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  3. I agree with Zoe's comment; this is a really good draft that just needs a little tweaking. I think you do answer how there is good storytelling in the novel, you just need to state that more explicitly in your thesis. You also might need to explain how some of your examples support the novel as good storytelling. Otherwise this was a well written, interesting draft.

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  4. Eric, very interesting piece. You left me wanting to read more. Very good example with Moira maintaining her individuality even in a difficult situation. Is there a quote you could tie in there? And well done looking at what sounds like a good book from a critical perspective as opposed to just focusing on all of its strengths. I agree with you that scope is key in a great novel. This just needs a little tightening up in the process of making it into an essay. Your thesis isn’t completely structured into your intro paragraph but again this is just a blog post and I’m sure you should have no problem stating the strengths and weaknesses you listed and contrasting them within a thesis statement. Once you have that main idea written down and have added more supporting evidence/quotes, this should turn out to be a great piece.

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  5. I think your actual writing style is just awesome--you manage to sound professional without getting that really cheesy, fake effect that a lot of students wind up with, if that makes sense. I think the thing that most stood out to me as something to change would be the thesis. Perhaps you could not only make it somewhat more specific by describing a few basic things that made the story as excellent as it was, but also the limitations you later mentioned. I also think that you should possibly develop your conclusion a bit more. That said, the paper was interesting to read (and something that I could follow easily even without having read the book while also demonstrating clearly that you've really been able to make connections between the writing and real life) and really left me interested in the book, myself!

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